OuiSi · Writing

Pass the story

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Grades 2–5 Teaching 35 min Plus 2 to set out, 2 to clear Class groups of 5–6 Set any Prep one sheet per child

set out 2′ Your card, your first line 6′ Pass left 16′ Read it whole 8′ Close 5′ clear 2′

Goal: Each child starts a story and then has to continue five that somebody else began. Reading closely enough to carry on is the skill.
Materials: One OuiSi Photo-Card set. One card per child, plus a few spare. One sheet of paper per child.

Grades 2–3: Circles of four, two minutes a pass — the full 35 min
Grades 4–5: Circles of six, and a second card added partway round — the full 35 min

1 · Your card, your first line

6 min

Groups of five or six sitting in a circle. Each child takes a card and a sheet.

Put your card at the top of your page. Write one sentence that starts a story about it.

One sentence only. Do not finish anything.

One sentence is deliberate. A child who writes a paragraph leaves the next person nothing to do, and the whole lesson is about what you hand on.

2 · Pass left

16 min

Pass your card and your page to the person on your left.

Read what is there. Add one sentence that carries it on. Then pass again.

Keep passing until every page has been round the circle. Call the pass yourself, every ninety seconds or so.

Calling the pass keeps the pace even and stops one slow writer holding up the circle. Ninety seconds feels tight and that is right — a tight window produces a sentence rather than a paragraph.

Partway round, one instruction that changes everything.

Your sentence has to fit what is already written. You cannot ignore it and start again.

3 · Read it whole

8 min

Pages come back to whoever started them.

Read your story from the beginning. All of it.

Where did it stop being the story you thought you were starting?

That question is the one worth asking. Every writer in the circle gave up control at sentence two, and finding the exact line where it turned is good reading.

4 · Close

5 min

Read us the one sentence somebody else wrote that you wish you had written.

Crediting a specific sentence to a specific person is the best thing that happens in this lesson. Leave time for three or four.

Watch for

Not reading before writing. The commonest failure, and it shows up as a story that contradicts itself. Say read it all, every pass — not just the last line.
Hijacking. Then she woke up and it was all a dream. Name it early as off limits, with a smile.
Long sentences. A child who writes four sentences has taken someone else's turn. One sentence, called on the clock.
Someone's page getting unkind. Rare, but it happens in a circle. Say once that the story belongs to whoever started it, and write accordingly.

Adapt

Spoken version — no paper. The story goes round out loud, each child adding a sentence, which works well for younger or pre-writing groups.
Dyslexia and emerging writers — the spoken version removes the barrier entirely, or let a partner scribe.
Multilingual learners — any language, and a sentence in a different language is a fine addition. The next writer works from the card as much as the words.
Anxiety — the shared authorship helps here. No page is anyone's alone, and nobody reads their own work aloud unless they want to.

Curriculum links. Opening a narrative in a single sentence · Reading an existing text closely enough to continue it · Adding to somebody else's work without overriding it · Reading a collaborative text whole and finding where it turned.
Standard codes vary by state and district — these are the skills exercised, for you to map to your own.

From OuiSi Storybuilder. The circle mode of the storytelling play, run as a writing lesson.
Screen-free. No codes and no devices. Works with any OuiSi Photo-Card set.